1) The pitch. Same as last time, 1-minute long. No Web cams. No sitting. Be dynamic! Upload the video to YouTube (as you do with all of your videos) and post the link.
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was outright wrong or silly.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Be sure to include the phrase "Elevator Pitch No. 3" in the post title and label it "Week 10."
Hey Sofia! This is a really interesting pitch. I really like the creativity here with the white and black contrast from the text and the boxes behind it. I think you may have forgotten to post the video with it though so unfortunately I can't give any advice on that part of the pitch. Anyway check out my elevator pitch at: http://sowersent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Sofia, so I can't really give feedback on the instructions for making the pitch..sorry! Next time, remember to actually post the video, and you can always do Yellodig to make up any lost points - it's what I've been doing on some of the more time-consuming assignments. Feel free to check out my blog post here: http://biancamarques23.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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DeleteHey! I don't see any video here, just the instructions for the assignment, so I can't really give you any feedback! Like it was mentioned in the post above, if you need more points use YellowDig! If you'd like to take a look at my pitch, you can check it out here: http://nicmcq.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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